jesus christ this is so hot. and i love their dirty talk because it really shows how much they know each other, and love each other, but also trust each other. they've probably both been their worst selves to each other and they came through all that still caring about each other and being so close. and LIKING each other. i love that. really shows that they used to be best friends and like, they still are in a way.
but holy shit is this hot. if you ever want to write a second part with a threesome? i would be so here for it.

shannon! god, i love her so much. i'm glad she's alive in this <3